I actually thought this was pretty good.
I really liked the main theme, how you accented the chords formed with the strings was probably what I thought made the song for me :D
I also thought the progressions throughout the song were pretty good.
What I think could be improved is the intensity of the semiquaver high hats being varied, in that beat that I think you made yourself, given that the high-hats are pretty intense. But this might just be an older song you've made.
I also thought your bass was okay, but I wanted it to be a bit more powerful, but it wasn't absolutely necessary :P
I think this is a good submission.
Also, I would've given you a review back earlier, but it never really occurred to me that you might also make things and put them on NG yourself haha