I actually thought this was pretty good.
I really liked the main theme, how you accented the chords formed with the strings was probably what I thought made the song for me :D
I also thought the progressions throughout the song were pretty good.
What I think could be improved is the intensity of the semiquaver high hats being varied, in that beat that I think you made yourself, given that the high-hats are pretty intense. But this might just be an older song you've made.
I also thought your bass was okay, but I wanted it to be a bit more powerful, but it wasn't absolutely necessary :P
I think this is a good submission.
Also, I would've given you a review back earlier, but it never really occurred to me that you might also make things and put them on NG yourself haha
I enjoyed it.
However, the reason I didn't give you a better score for this was because
1. I thought that the autotune kinda drew out too much of the emotion from the vocals, if you can get everything pitched well without the autotune, I probably would've given this a 9.
2. There's a note that's being played on the guitar in the (outro bridge?) at certain times (3.23-3.26 is one of them. With the accompaniment playing the same note at 3.27 it sounds okay though) and I think it's a bit dissonant in a song that it doesn't fit.
3. The chorus is a 4-chord xD Which I don't care about thaaaat much, because you made it sound okay, but I just want to warn you against overusing it in other songs. Using it too much change make your songs sound VERY samey, which you probably don't want
And there are all the issues I had with it :)
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